MY voki :)

martes, 8 de noviembre de 2011

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  1. This is Michael. Below are some corrections and comments. Corrections are in ''quotations'' and comments are in (parenthesis).

    0:19
    (You are the second person I have seen do this. ''Differents'' is not a word. Look at the following correction. Also, if you are interested, you may want to look into the ''differences'' between the two ''different'' words: ''different'' and ''differences'' and when you would use them...see what I did there? :D [if you want more help with this, ask, email or message me])
    You have to stretch lots of ''different'' parts of the ''body. For'' example...
    (What do you mean by ''dolls?'' I don't think it means what you think it means.)

    0:27
    ......to run and ''touch the'' other ''person's hand. Then'' the other person ''has'' to run and touch ''the'' other ''person. This happens repeatedly.''

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